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  This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): CCYeeBo. Peer reviewers: VanceScarlett.

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I found this article to be exceptionally well put together. It had an excellent narrative structure in telling the events in order per section. I especially liked the Career section and the way it told the story of how Jenny got into the film industry and some interaction with other already established film makers. If I were to make any suggestions I would put the Legacy section before the Filmography section, as tables of information seem to go better at the end of articles as annexes. Overall an excellent article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by VanceScarlett (talkcontribs) 04:41, 5 November 2015 (UTC)Reply