Talk:Jennifer Webster-Cyriaque

Latest comment: 2 years ago by SL93 in topic Did you know nomination

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk01:33, 19 February 2022 (UTC)Reply

 
Webster-Cyriaque

Created TJMSmith (talk). Self-nominated at 00:10, 14 February 2022 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Article is new enough, long enough and neutral. The hook is cited and interesting. The photo is free, looks good and in the article. My only concerns are paraphrasing and sourcing. There's too much close paraphrasing of these sources [2], [3]. It also seems like the article is a little undersourced, there's 3 refs right now, one of which is her doctoral thesis. I'm not sure if it meets notability or verifiability guidelines like this. It would be good to have more secondary sources before putting the article on the front page. BuySomeApples (talk) 22:04, 15 February 2022 (UTC)Reply

  • @BuySomeApples: care to take another look? I have added a bit and copyedited. Earwig still reports similarities but they are mostly noun phrases. I have also added another source which adds no new text but it is a third party source and its no longer an orphan. Hope @TJMSmith: can overcheck my changes. Victuallers (talk) 13:35, 17 February 2022 (UTC)Reply