Talk:Jennifer Keller

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Kitsunegami in topic Untitled

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In the "Character Arc" section, the following sentence needs to be rewritten so that it is clear and not a run-on. I would do it but I haven't seen the episode it refers to so I don't have enough information to be able to rebuild the sentence.

"After discovering the Athosians were missing, she helps Teyla through the night, and even overcomes some of her fears and drawbacks from her early years, after injuring Nabel, who is later revealed to have worked for Michael."

--Kitsunegami (talk) 10:01, 9 June 2010 (UTC)Reply