Talk:Jean Thomassen

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Netherzone in topic COI tag (March 2023)

Reminder on over-citation

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Hi @Rogeratlymm, as you appear to be the author and main contributor to this article, you may want to read the relevant guidelines on citing sources and specifically, this text on why you shouldn't add too many citations in text.

Basically: avoid adding too many inline citations (9 citations on the first sentence is way overkill). Also, as much as possible put them in the end of sentences or paragraphs to make it readable.

As much I'd like to do it myself, your references appear to be print publications that I have no access to. Meaning, I don't have an easy way to figure out which citations to trim and which ones to keep. I figured you know the subject already so you know how to reduce the number of inline citations, but let me know if you have other questions or need any help. Thanks, PritongKandule-✉️📝 14:44, 28 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

Many thanks - I will look into the citations issue. Meanwhile can you help me with another issue? Thank you. Rogeratlymm (talk) 16:16, 28 February 2023 (UTC)Reply
I have now reduced the number of citations as suggested, and I have also made other textual improvements. Thanks you for your comments. Rogeratlymm (talk) 11:32, 3 March 2023 (UTC)Reply

Unverifiable sources

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Most of the references are unverifiable. Consider replacing those that can be verified, such as newspaper and magazine clippings, or add urls to those that are currently unverifiable. Netherzone (talk) 22:02, 11 March 2023 (UTC)Reply

COI tag (March 2023)

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See: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Rogeratlymm#March_2023 Article may need clean up by unconnected editors. It currently contains large portions of unsourced content, tone and puffery clean-up. Photo copyvio issues. Netherzone (talk) 18:21, 10 March 2023 (UTC)Reply

COI editors should stop directly editing the article, and instead use the edit request system spelled out in WP:COI Netherzone (talk) 15:52, 20 March 2023 (UTC)Reply

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