Talk:Japanese destroyer Nire (1944)

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Harrias in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Harrias (talk · contribs) 11:29, 25 June 2020 (UTC)Reply


I'll take a look at this. Harrias talk 11:29, 25 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

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Prose

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  • Can you provide a link for "Matsu class" in the Design and description.
  • "The ships measured 100 meters (328 ft 1 in) overall.." It's been a while since I've reviewed one of these, is it common to omit "length"?
  • "..ordered in Fiscal Year 1944 under.." No need to capitalise fiscal year.
    • My source source treats it like a proper noun.
  • "Nire assigned that day.." Missing "was".
    • Oops.

Nothing much else from me, a small and neat article. Harrias talk 08:36, 1 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

@Sturmvogel 66: Just a note that this has been on hold for over a week with no progress. Harrias talk 07:28, 9 July 2020 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:26, 11 July 2020 (UTC)Reply
All good, passing now. Harrias talk 16:34, 11 July 2020 (UTC)Reply