Talk:Japanese destroyer Nara (1944)/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Iazyges in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 21:02, 9 January 2021 (UTC)Reply

Criteria edit

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a  Y
    1.b  Y
  • 2
    2.a  Y
    2.b  Y
    2.c  Y
    2.d  Y
  • 3
    3.a  Y
    3.b  Y
  • 4
    4.a  Y
  • 5
    5.a  Y
  • 6
    6.a  Y
    6.b  Y
  • No DAB links  Y
  • No dead links  Y
  • No missing citations  Y

Discussion edit

Prose Suggestions edit

Please note that almost all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion. Any changes I deem necessary for the article to pass GA standards I will bold.

Lede edit

  • Suggest expanding lede, perhaps with the information of her fleet assignments, that she was surrendered to Allied control at the end of the war.

Sources edit

  • Suggest archiving the Nevitt source with Wayback machine. Research into him for WP:V purposes suggest he has passed away, so the status of the website may change.
  • I have made some copyedits, feel free to revert any of these. @Sturmvogel 66: That is all my suggestion, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:16, 9 January 2021 (UTC)Reply