Talk:Japanese destroyer Kuwa (1944)
Latest comment: 8 months ago by Djmaschek in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Djmaschek (talk · contribs) 02:18, 19 November 2023 (UTC)
Initial review
editI plan to GA review this article. My comments will follow. Djmaschek (talk) 02:18, 19 November 2023 (UTC)
Review 1
edit@Sturmvogel 66: Please fix the issues listed below or argue your case for not fixing. Djmaschek (talk) 02:35, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
- Introduction: "Kuwa probably sank one of the American ships with torpedoes before sinking herself with the loss of about half her crew." (After reading this, I wondered if Kuwa's torpedo ran in a circle, "sinking herself". Suggest: "before being sunk herself".) Done
- Design and description, paragraph 1, sentence 1: You and I know what IJN means. But shouldn't it say "Imperial Japanese Navy (IJN)" in the introduction? Done
- Construction and career, paragraph 1, sentence 1: "35 May" (typo) Done
- Construction and career, paragraph 1: "Upon her completion on 25 July 1944" (Mismatch with 15 July infobox date.) Done
- Construction and career, paragraph 3: "10.00N 124.35W" (This is incorrect. I believe it should be 124.35E. See Ormoc Bay article.) Done
- All but the last bullet point are fixed. The coordinates are also listed at the top of the page. Djmaschek (talk) 02:32, 23 November 2023 (UTC)
- All done. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 10:14, 24 November 2023 (UTC)
- Last bullet point is now done. GA class. Djmaschek (talk) 05:30, 25 November 2023 (UTC)