Talk:Japanese destroyer Hinoki (1944)/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Jaguar in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 14:10, 31 December 2020 (UTC)
This one will be good. ♦ jaguar 14:10, 31 December 2020 (UTC)
- The lead summarises the article and is well written. I see no issues here
- "led the two Australian ships, the frigate Gascoyne and the sloop Warrego" - shouldn't the HMAS prefix be inserted?
- "The radar of the destroyer Charles Ausburne" - USS here. The reader wouldn't have known which navy she belonged to
- "A starshell fired at 22:26 silhouetted" - Starshell links to an actress. I've fixed the link
Another solid article. I can't find any issues with this, so it's an outright pass. I enjoyed reading this one. 
♦ jaguar 01:12, 5 January 2021 (UTC)