Talk:Japanese aircraft carrier Hiryū/GA1

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Reviewer: Retrolord (talk · contribs) 18:16, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

I'll do this one if nobody minds? ★★RetroLord★★ 18:16, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

" Parshall & Tully, pp.</ref>" I'd fix it for you but I have no idea how. ★★RetroLord★★ 18:18, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

• Ooops, deleted.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:41, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

Is it normal to have a class overview in the infobox above info directly relevant to the subject? It just seems a bit strange to me, is there a precedent you have from other ship article? ★★RetroLord★★ 16:30, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

• It was a single-ship class, so it gets a class infobox.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:02, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

" the only other carrier to share this feature was the Japanese aircraft carrier Akagi" The only other Japanese carrier with that design, or the only one in history? Could you please clarify? ★★RetroLord★★ 16:41, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

• That bit was some legacy text that I meant to clean out, but obviously forgot. The island is properly discussed in the flight deck and hangars section.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:02, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

"6,000 kg (13,000 lb)" Thats the wikicode for one of your measurements. I'm not too sure how to change it so I wont but I think the imperial and metric measurements are the wrong way around. ★★RetroLord★★ 16:41, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

• Fixed.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:02, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

" was only 1 inch" Could we remove the "only"? It implies that this is somehow insufficient or below average. if that is the case could you sya it directly? Otherwise can we remove it? ★★RetroLord★★ 16:41, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

• Removed.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:02, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

" Hiryū returned to Japan on 7 August and began a short refit" Last thing I can see in the article before passing. What exactly did the refit entail? ★★RetroLord★★ 19:00, 1 July 2013 (UTC)

• Not given in my sources, probably just general repairs and cleaning.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:24, 1 July 2013 (UTC)

  I'm happy to overlook it then. Article passed. Have a nice day, ★★RetroLord★★ 19:26, 1 July 2013 (UTC)

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