Talk:Jan Mayensfield/GA1
GA Review edit
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
GA toolbox |
---|
Reviewing |
Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch
Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 17:29, 18 November 2012 (UTC)
I will inspecting the Jan Mayensfield aerodrome today! Seems similar to the Dorothy Scott Airport (this one is public, though, etc.). TBrandley 17:29, 18 November 2012 (UTC)
- Where is the runways information referenced, as seen in the infobox?
- Link "North Atlantic Treaty Organization" upon first mention after lede per WP:REPEATLINK
- "The airport's only regular service" remove "only" per WP:NPOV; it's not huge POV, just minor, but still
- "by 30 meters (4,900 by 98 ft) and aligned 06–24" would change ending to "being aligned 06-24" or something
- I notice that most sentences regarding the airport, say "the airport", of course, but I feel that on some of them, you could say "Jan Mayensifield" to start, like "Jan Mayensifield has changing weather conditions"
- "The airport has changing weather conditions" don't really understand, clarify
Great work overall. Once the minor above concerns are addressed, I will pass the article based on the good article criteria. Well done and I found no concerns while inspecting the airport, very good! TBrandley 17:39, 18 November 2012 (UTC)