Talk:James the Deacon/GA1

GA Review

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OK, next up. I’ve made these changes including a switch to BE (centered to centred)

• Gregorian mission who came to England – which came, if the mission is the subject

fixed

• court of King Edwin of Deira to marry Edwin. – clunky, perhaps court of Edwin of Deira to marry the king or court of Deira to marry King Edwin?

fixed

• Edwin of Deira is a redirect

fixed

• Edwin died in battle at Hatfield against Penda of Mercia and Caedwalla in 633. – ...fighting against..., or perhaps Edwin died in battle against Penda of Mercia and Caedwalla at Hatfield in 663?

Fixed

• previous to Edwin's – prior to ?

fixed

• for celebrated Easter – something missing here

fixed (it was a missing "he"

• after this – perhaps after the synod?

fixed

• Why are there two days list for this saint, especially when the October date appears to be unsourced?

Samuel fixed this. It's two different days for two different denominations.

No real problems jimfbleak (talk) 10:03, 15 March 2009 (UTC)

Think I got them all! Ealdgyth - Talk 14:38, 15 March 2009 (UTC)

1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

2. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

3. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

4. It is stable.

   No edit wars etc.:

5. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

6. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Keep them coming! jimfbleak (talk) 16:38, 15 March 2009 (UTC)