Talk:Jail Break (Steven Universe)
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Plot summary changes
edit@2605:e000:24cc:2700:306d:e6c9:15fa:2273, 198.72.143.81, and Mariella Gemma: I would really like to avoid edit warring, but so far there has been no discussion on the changes to this article and others (Sworn to the Sword, Steven the Sword Fighter, Giant Woman) despite multiple talk page notes. I am open to making changes to the plot summary, and I don't want to call one version "better" or worse than the other. Perhaps I have been to quick to revert some of your changes just because I spotted a few instances of bad grammar or awkward phrasing. I apologize for any animosity that has come across. Please let me know here or through some other avenue why you think that your contributions have improved the plot summary, and we can work toward one we agree on. BTW, I am assuming these three identities all belong to the same individual just because they've been making the same changes. This isn't meant to be an accusation of sock puppetry, but if there are actually different individuals involved here please let me know. Boomur [☎] 00:25, 22 October 2015 (UTC)
Hi Boomur, Thanks for letting me know about this. In the plot summary, I see that you have put events of the episode that are SO WRONG! For example, did you see the fight during "Stronger Than You"? Garnet throws Jasper into the main power core of Peridot's ship. THAT's what caused the crash landing; Pearl, Amethyst and Steven didn't cause it! Also, Jasper COMES to Garnet; Garnet doesn't go to her! Plus, I want to add stuff, like in the last paragraph, when the Crystal Gems survived the crash landing, and Jasper needs another gem to fuse with her, and Lapis becomes the one. Plus, Cartoon Netwrok called the episode, alongside "The Return", AN ALL NEW HALF-HOUR SPECIAL! So you see, I was fixing the mistakes of events that DID NOT HAPPEN! I'm sure we can agree on a better summary to suit both of us. Thanks for letting me know about this. -User:Mariella Gemma
P.S. How about we put "The Return" and "Jail Break" on the same page? Sounds good? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mariella Gemma (talk • contribs) 01:17, 22 October 2015 (UTC)
Jail Break or Jailbreak?
editMost external sources seem to spell the title of this episode as "Jail Break", but the episode itself uses the spelling "Jailbreak" on the title / opening credits screen. Which version should we use? AJD (talk) 09:35, 25 July 2020 (UTC)