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I don't know what to do here. ~EDDY(talk/contribs)~ 15:17, 2 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
I think effort in practice will suffice. MWright96(talk) 15:35, 2 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
The ref states, "But he could score, a trait his father traces back to abundant hours hanging around those high school practices." I added a bit about his practice. ~EDDY(talk/contribs)~ 18:10, 2 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
"Proctor stood 5'10." - the convert template is needed for use on the text in bold
"He became the first player in school history to earn three All-State selections, and the third to earn first team honors," - repetition of the word "earn"
"He averaged 5.1 points, 2.0 rebounds and 1.1 assists per game as a freshman at Iona." - word-to-word copy of the SB Nation source verifying this text. Please reword accordingly
Changed to "As a freshman, he averaged 5.1 points, 2.0 rebounds and 1.1 assists per game." ~EDDY(talk/contribs)~ 20:33, 1 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
* "helping Iona win the Metro Atlantic Athletic Conference tournament and reach the NCAA Tournament." - repetition of the word "tournament"
I don't see the problem, they are two different tournaments. ~EDDY(talk/contribs)~ 20:33, 1 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
"and reach the NCAA Tournament." - and qualify for the
"The season was cancelled prior to the Big Ten Tournament," - mention the season was cancelled due to the COVID-19 pandemic as stated in The Patriot-News
"His father is a math teacher at William Penn Senior High School in York, Pennsylvania and baggage handler for Delta Air Lines at Harrisburg International Airport." - and a baggage handler
Am placing the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above. MWright96(talk) 18:25, 1 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
I have replied to all your concerns. Some I don't know what to do with, while others - the references - appear to be incorrect. Not sure where you got the publication date, maybe another printing of the AP stories? ~EDDY(talk/contribs)~ 20:40, 1 October 2020 (UTC)Reply