Talk:Jacksonville (Fringe)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Queenieacoustic (talk) 16:42, 23 June 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Plot

1. "but still unable to trigger her ability" Add "is" after "but".

Production

Nothing here.

Reception

Ratings

Nothing here.

Reviews

1. "A.V. Club" should be "The A.V. Club", and "A-" shouldn't be italicized.
2. "and "one of its finest hours" To avoid confusion, replace "its" with either "[Fringe's]" or "[the series'].
3. "Giving the episode a 8.0/10 rating," Typo, replace "a" with "an".
4. "Stegall praised Olivia's dream sequence and subsequent accusation to Walter," Replace "to" with "of".

Lead

Nothing here.

In conclusion

Another great article, just a few fixes and it will pass. I'll put it on hold for seven days. Queenieacoustic (talk) 16:42, 23 June 2011 (UTC)

All fixed. Thanks very much for all these quick reviews. When I get a chance, I'll begin reviewing more of yours. Thanks again! Ruby2010 comment! 17:13, 23 June 2011 (UTC)

Passed! Nice work! Queenieacoustic (talk) 17:15, 23 June 2011 (UTC)

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