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suggest adding a note about calibre of guns (L/50 etc)
Added.
do we know where her torpedo tubes were located?
Unfortunately no, it's not in Conway's.
In the Design section, She was also is quite repetitive
Fixed
Quarto, flying the flag of Rear Admiral Silvio Bellini and the British cruiser HMS Dartmouth, makes it sound like the Quarto was flying the HMS Dartmouth as well as a flag
Good catch, a comma was missing.
suggest Nino Bixio, HMS Weymouth and
Yeah, I think I had started writing that as "The cruisers NB and W and four..." and partially rewrote it halfway through.
I think, given the pattern of using ship prefixes then dropping them, that Helgoland should be SMS Helgoland at the first mention
Good catch.
In November 1940, tests with the new MT explosive motorboats with reduced charges were carried out, which later sank the cruiser HMS York during the war. is pretty clunky, I suggest splitting it into two sentences?
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
The article is in great shape. Placing this review on hold for seven days, just a few prose tweaks and a couple of MOS/style consistency questions to look at Passing.