Talk:Italian cruiser Dogali/GA1

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Parsecboy in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:07, 25 October 2014 (UTC)Reply


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:07, 25 October 2014 (UTC)Reply

  • No DABs and picture appropriately licensed.
  • I'm fairly certain that cylindrical (and rectangular) boilers were fire-tube types, not water-tube.
  • Explain L/40 in a note.
  • Brassey needs an OCLC #
  • Any links to the Robinson, Messenger or the Naval Maneuvers?
  • Add a class section to the infobox so we can see the cruisers before and after. Also add a navbox or equivalent at the bottom of the page. I just did both for the singleton French armored cruisers if you want to copy the (minimal) code involved for the infobox.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:06, 31 October 2014 (UTC)Reply
    • Everything should be fixed with the exception of The Messenger - there are tons of journals with that name in worldcat and many of them don't have much info, which makes it just about impossible to identify the correct one. Thanks Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 20:51, 31 October 2014 (UTC)Reply
      • So how then did you find the article?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:57, 31 October 2014 (UTC)Reply
        • Oh, I was talking about trying to find an oclc number in worldcat. The actual journal in google books doesn't offer much help either - as you can see the publication info I could pull from it was a bit thin. Parsecboy (talk) 13:04, 3 November 2014 (UTC)Reply