Talk:Issaquah Highlands/GA1
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Kosack in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 09:43, 11 October 2018 (UTC)
I'll take this one as well. Will post review as soon as possible. Kosack (talk) 09:43, 11 October 2018 (UTC)
Initial review
Lead edit
- Needs United States worked into the location for readers unfamiliar with area.
- Fixed.
History edit
- King County could be linked in the first paragraph here.
- Fixed.
- "The first homes at Issaquah Highland", > Issaquah Highlands (last paragraph).
- Fixed.
Transportation edit
- "operate bus service to Issaquah Highlands", might be an American/English difference but, this reads a little oddly to me. Should it be "operate a bus service" or services?
- Wasn't a ENGVAR difference, just a typo on my part. Fixed.
Very little I can find to bring up really. References are well formatted and of no concern. A well written piece. Placed on hold until the points above are addressed. Kosack (talk) 11:09, 11 October 2018 (UTC)
- @Kosack: Thanks for this review as well. All addressed as written above. SounderBruce 17:07, 11 October 2018 (UTC)
- @SounderBruce: All issues addressed, I have no further concerns. A thorough and detailed article which easily meets the GA criteria. Promoting. Kosack (talk) 18:28, 11 October 2018 (UTC)
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