Talk:Islands (The xx song)

Latest comment: 10 years ago by HĐ in topic GA Review
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December 13, 2013Good article nomineeListed
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GA Review edit

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Reviewer:  (talk · contribs) 04:23, 14 November 2013 (UTC) I'll review this. — Simon (talk) 04:23, 14 November 2013 (UTC)Reply

Lead
  • their self-titled debut studio album xx ---> I don't think we need "xx" here
  • and is a dark and simple indie pop track that features house influences and instrumentation from guitars and synthesizers. Croft and Sim, ---> I think it should be divided into a separate sentence
  • Croft and Sim, who provide vocals in the track ---> Past simple?
  • ITunes Festival ---> Must be "iTunes"
  Done all --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 07:05, 30 November 2013 (UTC)Reply

Oops... So much sorry for delaying the review, here are the last comments:

Composition
  • heard in lines ---> which are heard...
  • 26 October 2009, --> remove the comma
  Done all --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 14:19, 11 December 2013 (UTC)Reply

The rest is fine, good work! — Simon (talk) 09:07, 11 December 2013 (UTC)Reply

Thank you so much! I have addressed the comments --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 14:19, 11 December 2013 (UTC)Reply
Passing. Congrats! — Simon (talk) 05:30, 13 December 2013 (UTC)Reply
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