Talk:Institut collegial Vincent Massey Collegiate

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Parkthecar

Objectivity
Objectivity means being neutral, not influencing the readers feelings either way. I've corrected the biasness that was found in this article:
"With almost 1300 students enrolled, it has a vast array different programs, including over 100 courses." This sounds like an ad. I wrote it to sound more objective.
"The institution offers five languages:" It offers classes taught in 2 languages (English and French) but gives basic lessons for the others.
"The school is known for its strong EAL (English as an Additional Language) Programme. " Again, sounds like advertising. I wrote it more objectively. Parkthecar (talk) 07:17, 30 November 2008 (UTC)Reply