Talk:India national football team/GA1
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Reviewer: Royroydeb (talk · contribs) 06:48, 2 September 2017 (UTC)
Hi. I will be reviewing this and put my comments soon. RRD (talk) 06:48, 2 September 2017 (UTC)
Well written edit
- WP:Puffery: "was once considered one of the best teams in Asia," ,"considered to be the "golden era" of Indian football", "one of the best teams in Asia.", "India were still praised by fans and pundits" (the ref used also do not clearly say so)
- WP:Weasel words: "many historians and pundits believe", "what is still considered the team's greatest result"
RRD (talk) 13:27, 3 September 2017 (UTC)
- A few sentences in the head coaches section is preferable.
RRD (talk) 13:54, 5 September 2017 (UTC)
- What is meant by various home stadiums must be explained, if not in the main then in the footnote.
RRD (talk) 07:15, 7 September 2017 (UTC)
References edit
As of this version of the page:
Broad in its coverage edit
- The early years section of history can be expanded. RRD (talk) 13:54, 5 September 2017 (UTC)
- The top scorer goals does not tally with the ref 3 given.
- Fixed --ArsenalFan700 (talk) 05:58, 27 September 2017 (UTC)
- Biggest win and defeats are unsourced.
- The ref 15 only speaks about the Colombo cup and other minor tournaments.
- The ref 17 opens to a generic page and has no information about Neville D Souza's hat-trick.
- The ref 25 does not mention that India's performance declined. It is a WP:Original Research
- the ref 29 does not mention India's decline.
- ref 42: is the author of the article of Hard Tackle referred as football pundit?
- In results and schedule section, the future matches are unsourced.
RRD (talk) 07:15, 7 September 2017 (UTC)
Images edit
No problem with images. But what about the logo? RRD (talk) 06:45, 7 September 2017 (UTC)
Other edit
@ArsenalFan700: Please have a look. RRD (talk) 17:14, 13 September 2017 (UTC)
- Will have a look later tonight. Give me a few days (4) to get going on it. --ArsenalFan700 (talk) 23:38, 13 September 2017 (UTC)
Stability edit
This is Ok. I dont find any edit wars. RRD (talk) 07:15, 7 September 2017 (UTC)
Result edit
I am now closing this review. This review has been for long and satisfactory response has not been received. RRD (talk) 16:54, 11 October 2017 (UTC)