Talk:Inchon (film)/GA1
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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 00:39, 9 January 2010 (UTC) Overall, this is a great article. I disagree with the claims about it being too long or detailed; I've seen overly huge articles, and this one's not an example. That being said, I do have a couple issues:
- Given the length, this article may be helped by another image or two. Perhaps add one of Olivier, MacArthur, or another actor?
- The article as a whole does seem to veer almost pov at times, as it feels like it is blaming the unification church for the film's failure, when it was just overall bad. Granted, their having such a significant role in the film's production makes the line blurry as to what's pov and what's just being honest. It's not serious enough to not be a GA, but if you're going for FA on this, then I ask that you find someone to look for unification pov and see if changes are necessary.
- Having reception and criticism is good, but it feels as if almost every paper's opinion on the film is on here, and it ends up feeling a little redundant reading through it.
None of the issues above keep this from being a GA, so I'll pass it, but keep these in mind as you continue to improve the article. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 00:39, 9 January 2010 (UTC)