Talk:Incapillo/GA1

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Sainsf in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:01, 22 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:01, 22 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

General
  • No copyvio/dablink/external link issues
  • No caption for the one image in the article? (not the infobox ones)
Lead
  • Mind adding a few words on what a caldera is?
Geography and structure
  • Wikilink caldera
  • also known as Bonete caldera Should go to the 1st para, where you discuss the etymology
Geology
  • Wikilink Nazca plate, isotope
  • Wood et al. in 1987 Not the way we usually write things here. You can say "a 1997 study" or "Wood and colleagues in 1997" (but then you should give the full name of Wood and add who he is).
Climate, hydrology and vegetation
  • Does "grass" really need a link?
History
  • "mafic" is a duplink
  • "distal" may be a tough term
  • comparable to the Katmai ignimbrite ..."that of" the Katmai...
  • What are "Aeolian effects"?

Rest looks good. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:19, 22 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Thanks, this can now be promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 09:42, 22 June 2016 (UTC)Reply