Talk:Inaccessible Island rail/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Casliber in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 22:00, 26 May 2017 (UTC)Reply


Dunno..rails never really appealed to me as much as other birds...but here goes...you know the drill...Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 22:00, 26 May 2017 (UTC)Reply

Sentences 2,3, and 4 in the lead all start with "It....: - I'd append the bit about being the smallest extant flightless bird in the world onto sentence 2 for starters.
link British Ornithologists' Club?
The specific name rogersi honours the Rev Rogers - missing a period...or expand "Rev."
The Inaccessible Island rail has a low basal metabolic rate (BMR), measured in a 1989 at around 60-68% the rate expected for a bird of their weight. - singular/plural
link cinder cones

Looks alright otherwise Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 01:19, 27 May 2017 (UTC)Reply

Addressed all those points I hope. Sabine's Sunbird talk 03:27, 27 May 2017 (UTC)Reply

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Pass or Fail:   nice work/well done. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 04:21, 27 May 2017 (UTC)Reply