Talk:In Your Eyes (Inna song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 22:18, 3 July 2017 (UTC)

Infobox

• Something is wrong with the flatlist, you are missing something in the songwriter(s) section.

 Done

Lead

• Fine.

Background and release

• Remove "both"
• "are played" → were played. It should be on the same tense.

 Done

Composition and reception

• "alert" → what do you mean? Fast pace rhythm?
• "found "In Your Eyes" was the catchiest" → believed that "In Your Eyes" was the catchiest track from Party Never Ends
• although "never mind the silly bit overdubbed in the chorus" → although he found the chorus to have a "silly bit overdubbed"
• "Commercially, the track experienced minor success on record charts." → Commercially, the track debuted...
• Only one source for the peak? Did he talk on the podcast about when it entered the song?

 Done

Music video

• "This and other aspects led to the visual being likened to Rihanna's clip for "Pour It Up"" → This and other aspects led its visual being likened to Rihanna's "Pour It Up"
• Remove the links from the image as well.

 Done.

Live performances

• and performed the song. → while performing the song.
• "interpreting a cover version of Justin Bieber's "Love Yourself" (2015) and a stripped-down version of "Endless" (2011)" → not relevant
• "Inna also opened the Untold Festival in 2016." → same as previous

 Done

Track listing

• Good idea.

Credits and personnel

• "Rokstone Studios – recording studio" → Above in a sentence like "Recorded at Rokstone Studios, London, United Kingdom"

 Done

Charts

• The Turkish source is not taking me there directly, seems to be an error with "{{" → fix the issue

 Done

Release history

• Please use this source for radio airplay it has the label.[1]

 Done

References

• Fine.

External links

• Fine

Overall GA review

• Address minor issues. On hold for seven days. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:22, 4 July 2017 (UTC)

@MarioSoulTruthFan: Thank you very much for the review. I have done everything besides:

1. Yes, there is only one source for the peaks in Romania. The source is a list of podcasts; seeing the dates "In Your Eyes" reached no X or Y, the readers can select the respective podcast.

How do they know that? Wouldn't it be easier for you to add here the actual podcast as well or use a quote saying which one is for the peak on the debut on the chart?

1. I think the fact that she sang those two songs at her concert in Mexico is a little bit relevant for the context of the event. Also, it expands the "LIve performances" section a little bit.

That can't be the only aim, the article is not regarding that concert only the performance of that song and should stay that away.

@Cartoon network freak: please reply. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:45, 4 July 2017 (UTC)

Thanks again, Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:15, 4 July 2017 (UTC)

@MarioSoulTruthFan: Done both points + the issue with the thumbnail. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 04:59, 5 July 2017 (UTC)