Talk:Impressive Instant/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Robin (talk · contribs) 05:36, 28 May 2013 (UTC)

• Reviewing. — Robin (talk) 05:36, 28 May 2013 (UTC)

Critical reception

• Ben Kender from Yahoo! Voices complimented the new musical direction taken by Madonna and Ahmadzaï. Comparing it to the title track, "Music", Kender said that the song got their adrenaline rushing even faster --- "their"? who are they?
  • That would be the listener, lol. —Indian:BIO · ^{[ ChitChat ]} 04:33, 29 May 2013 (UTC)
  • Kendar is the only person cited in that sentence, so shouldn't it be "his adrenaline". — Robin (talk) 12:56, 29 May 2013 (UTC)

But I see now that you've reworded. Okeydokey. — Robin (talk) 12:58, 29 May 2013 (UTC)

• Delink Billboard
  • Did it. —Indian:BIO · ^{[ ChitChat ]} 04:33, 29 May 2013 (UTC)
• BBC's John Hand noticed the quirky influence of producer on the song, while calling it a rancey, club track. --- This sentence needs to be reworded.
  • How's it now? —Indian:BIO · ^{[ ChitChat ]} 04:33, 29 May 2013 (UTC)

Good. — Robin (talk) 12:56, 29 May 2013 (UTC)

Live performances

Britney Spears, Slant Magazine, and NME need to be delinked.

• • Done. —Indian:BIO · ^{[ ChitChat ]} 04:33, 29 May 2013 (UTC)

Charts

(Peter Rauhofer's Drowned World Dub) --- why is this sentence there?

• Per MOS:CHARTS, any remix or alternate version of the song which charted, should be noted as such. In this case, the remix was promoted as you can see, not the album version, hence it is noted as such

Okay — Robin (talk) 12:56, 29 May 2013 (UTC)

Refs

• 3. link Billboard and its publisher
• 57. delink Greg Knot
  • Done. —Indian:BIO · ^{[ ChitChat ]} 04:33, 29 May 2013 (UTC)

Status

On hold. — Robin (talk) 14:36, 28 May 2013 (UTC)

Did all of them. —Indian:BIO · ^{[ ChitChat ]} 04:33, 29 May 2013 (UTC)

Passing — Robin (talk) 13:05, 29 May 2013 (UTC)

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