Talk:Impression management/Archives/2015
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Wiki-psyc in topic Article needs work
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Proofreading of Article Needed
I would recommend that someone go through to proofread and correct the grammar errors in this article. There are several sentences that are either structured poorly or missing words.
The language used in this article is also quite informal and doesn't seem to match the language I have seen throughout the rest of the Wikipedia articles.
I will have time next week to make the corrections, but I thought I'd mention it in case someone else has the time do do it before then.
Article needs work
I made the following changes. Much more is needed!
- Start → [690346602]
- Introduction → Minor rewrite
- Self presentation → retitle as Self presentation (psychology), group related text under heading, and "Boasting"
- Motives and strategies → retitle to Professional communications, remove unrelated text
- Add → The Internet subheading, group relevant text within, remove template, irrelevant external links
- End → [690346994]
- Wiki-psyc (talk) 20:17, 12 November 2015 (UTC)