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Latest comment: 11 years ago by 0z in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: 0z (talk · contribs) 10:24, 1 October 2012 (UTC)Reply

General edit

Infobox edit

  • Is there a single cover?
    • Not that I could find, no. It is a bit unusual, but I don't think there was one.
  • July 23, 2003 > July 26, 2003
  • Mention the studios and locations in Recorded

Lead edit

  • Mention the song's release date and record label
  • Link [[Music journalism|music critics]]

Background and recording edit

Composition edit

  • Remove According to the sheet music published by Musicnotes.com, → Not needed
  • You say "the song" a lot here. Replace some of them with "If We Are the Body" or "it"
  • Link [[Refrain|chorus]]

Critical reception and accolades edit

  • Link [[Music journalism|music critics]]
  • Remove Mark Hall link. You've already linked the name in Background and recording.

Chart performance edit

  • Remove self-titled debut album link

Live performances edit

Credits and personnel edit

  • No issues

Charts edit

  • No issues

Release and radio history edit

  • No issues

References edit

  • FN2 – missing publisher
  • FN4 – remove CCM Magazine and Salem Publishing links
  • FN5 – fix dash
  • FN6 – theres two dot points after Apple Inc
  • FN9 – theres two dot points after the S in the author's name
  • FN10 – remove the Christianity Today link
  • FN11 – fix dash
  • FN12 – use the "Cite news" template because the source is a newspaper article
    •  YCitation was replaced so point is not relevant anymore. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)Reply
  • FN13 – fix dash
  • FN14 – Fix dash. Also, remove Radio & Records and VNU Media links.
  • FN15 – remove the Christianity Today link
  • FN16 – Remove Billboard link. Also, publisher is missing.
  • FN17 to FN22 – remove Billboard and Prometheus Global Media links
  • FN23 – Remove Billboard and VNU Media links. Also, the original url is missing.
    •  YDone, but the original url does not exist anymore. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)Reply
  • FN25 & FN26 – remove Jesus Freak Hideout links
  • FN27 – use the "Cite news" template
  • FN29 – use the "Cite news" template
  • FN30 – fix dash
  • FN31 to FN34 – remove Billboard and Prometheus Global Media links

Summary edit

Great work! Article is well written. On hold for 7 days. — Oz (talk) 11:53, 3 October 2012 (UTC)Reply

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