Talk:Ieremia Tabai/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Thebiguglyalien (talk · contribs) 19:25, 10 August 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: TheNuggeteer (talk · contribs) 11:43, 28 August 2024 (UTC)

Going to review this! 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 11:43, 28 August 2024 (UTC)

Lead

• Whats 'i-Kiribati'? You should probably change it to 'Kiribati'.
• According to MOS:LEADLENGTH (as part of the lead sections requirement) the recommended lead length for this article (3,000 words) is two or three paragraphs. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 12:03, 28 August 2024 (UTC)

Education

• Source 1 does not exactly state frugality.
• where he had to work through his stutter to give a speech in an oratory club What makes the speech special to make it mentioned in the article?
• in particular having a great influence on him A bit suspicious by the 'great' here, maybe 'strong'? 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 12:03, 28 August 2024 (UTC)

Other comments

Many of the sources here are inaccessible book sources, AGF'ing them. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 12:03, 28 August 2024 (UTC) Reviewing the rest later! 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 12:03, 28 August 2024 (UTC)