Talk:Idaho State Veterans Cemetery

Latest comment: 19 days ago by Viriditas in topic Re: Discrimination criticism

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Hey man im josh talk 15:15, 25 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

  • ... that Idaho was the last U.S. state to build a military cemetery, opening the Idaho State Veterans Cemetery in 2004? Source: Feinberg, Teddy (2024-05-27). "Idaho veterans cemetery recognizes Memorial Day, pays tribute to those killed in action". The Idaho Press. Retrieved 2024-07-18.
Created by Bsoyka (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.

Bsoyka (tcg) 02:07, 19 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Article is new, long enough and neutral. It cites sources inline. "Earwig's Copyvio Detector" reports very few text similarities, commenting "violation unlikely". Both hooks are well-formatted, and interesting. Their lengths are within limit. I cannot judge the fact of the first hook as "the last veteran cemetery" because I cannot access ref [1], and the ref [2] does not explicitly say as such. I AGF for this. The fact of ALT1 is accurate with the source given. QPQ was done. Good to go. I prefer ALT1 hook as being much eye-catching. CeeGee 10:18, 25 July 2024 (UTC).Reply


Re: Discrimination criticism

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It's not exactly clear what being buried together means. Do you mean that two coffins would be placed together in the same grave? If you could explain this just a bit, that would help the reader. It may seem obvious to the writer and editors, but to me, the layperson, I have no idea what it entails. Does the grave need to be made wider? Are the coffins placed side by side? How does it work? Viriditas (talk) — Preceding undated comment added 22:57, 3 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Viriditas: Hey! Apologies for the confusion—I realize now that the article didn't specify that both women opted for cremated remains. I've edited the article to reflect that, so hopefully, it reads a little clearer now. I hope this helps, and thanks for the heads-up! Bsoyka (tcg) 23:11, 3 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Thank you! Viriditas (talk) 23:13, 3 August 2024 (UTC)Reply