Revisions for clarity in English attempted; are they correct?? edit

There were various English grammar and syntax issues with this BLP Stub. I attempted several improvements. If my efforts are correct, great. BUT someone who knows Sweden and its language well & also is fluent in English may be able to do better. Thanks very much!! Tack så mycket!! Left Central (talk) 04:08, 11 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Hi 102.216.183.19 (talk) 20:47, 3 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

likes u 102.216.183.19 (talk) 20:48, 3 September 2023 (UTC)Reply