Talk:Ice Hockey in Harlem

Latest comment: 9 years ago by 66.177.229.59 in topic Cultural References

Primary/Secondary Sources

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Making objective, Our/We

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Someone previously and correctly tagged as relying on primary sources. Appears much of the content was copy+pasted directly from the organizations web-pages. Phrases like "Four years ago.." persist, whenever that was. I removed several references to 'we' and 'our'. Could have been one-edit, sorry! Not a wiki-editor but it was an easy fix. Thank you to original author! I got the information I was looking for. 66.177.229.59 (talk) 14:23, 30 December 2014 (UTC)Reply

Cultural References

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Opening line of Springsteen's song 'Jungleland' on the 'Born to Run' album. 66.177.229.59 (talk) 14:23, 30 December 2014 (UTC)Reply