Talk:I Will Never Let You Down/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 11:01, 31 December 2022 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will get on with this today! --K. Peake 11:01, 31 December 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good!
• Mention the release was after Ora teased the song earlier in the month
• "on the Dance Club Songs" → "on the Dance Club Songs chart"
• For the top 50 sentence, instead mention the number of other countries it entered this ranking in and add some included to avoid a supermarket list
• "on 31 March." → "on 31 March 2014."

Background and composition

• Img looks good!
• "by uploading the single's cover art" → "uploading the single's cover art"
• Wikilink music video
• [5][7][1] shouldn't these be in numerical order?
• "Her album was scheduled" → "The album was scheduled"
• "Musically, it is an" → "Musically, "I Will Never Let You Down" is an"
• The electro-pop genre is not sourced
• Remove overly obvious wikilink on guitar

Reception

• "has since received critical acclaim" → "was met with critical acclaim"
• "start it over again."" → "start it over again"." per MOS:QUOTE
• Pipe Vulture to Vulture.com per MOS:LINK2SECT
• "elaborated "if your Monday" → "elaborated, "If your Monday" per the source
• The two singles aren't directly mentioned by Vox, so add using []
• "she has definitely found" → "Ora has definitely found" per the source
• Write "after her 2012 singles" instead, to avoid wasting time writing the year for each one
• "more than 994,000 units." → "more than 994,000 units in the UK."
• Remove pipe on topped per WP:OVERLINK
• "number 5 on the ARIA Singles Chart and reached number 9" → "number five on the ARIA Singles Chart and reached number nine" per MOS:NUM
• Add the sources for the CHR/Top 40 and Hot AC charts

Promotion

• Remove wikilink on music video
• "Taking place in LA," → "Taking place in Los Angeles," because that is obviously what the source means
• "in a outdoor-setting" → "in an outdoor-setting"
• Shouldn't you write "the two backup dancers Polly and Sophie Duniam." or something similar since I'm not sure if namely is required
• "in front of a pink setting as well as in a" → "in front of a pink setting and in a"
• "as "sweet" and "sexy", writing" → "as "sweet and sexy", writing" since these come directly after each other
• "off [Ora's] playful side."" → "off [Ora's] playful side"." per MOS:QUOTE
• "Garibaldi for MTV noted" → "Christina Garibaldi for MTV noted" with the wikilink
• "vibe of the song."" → "vibe of the song"."
• "clothes, commenting that "We're" → "clothes, commenting: "We're"
• "an elegant model."" → "an elegant model"."
• "On 24 June," → "On 24 June 2014,"
• Cut down the number of remix artists mentioned to avoid a supermarket list
• Remove the release year in brackets for the compilation album since the release date is already mentioned in this sentence

Track listing

• Good

Charts

• Good

Certifications

• Good

Release history

• Format → Format(s)
• Label → Label(s)

See also

• Good

References

• Copyvio score looks very good at 33.3%!!!
• Pipe Capital to Capital (radio network) on ref 1 instead of ref 3
• Pipe Official Charts Company to Official Charts on ref 5
• Ref 6 is missing a space between Returns and With
• Wikilink Spotify on ref 7
• completemusicupdate.com → Complete Music Update on ref 9 with the wikilink
• Pipe Vogue to Vogue (magazine) on ref 10
• Cite The Hollywood Reporter as work/website instead on ref 11 with the wikilink
• Wikilink Apple Music on the first instance of ref 12
• Cite Digital Spy as publisher instead on ref 16
• Pipe Vulture to Vulture.com per MOS:LINK2SECT on ref 23
• Wikilink MTV on ref 53

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 13:05, 31 December 2022 (UTC)

• Hey @Kyle Peake: happy new year and sorry for the late reply. I'm currently very busy with some personal matters and I just wanted to let you know that I will fix all the issues tomorrow. Iaof2017 (talk) 13:39, 4 January 2023 (UTC)

• Iaof2017 That is good, I look forward to seeing that today and I hope with all my heart you are alright. --K. Peake 07:43, 5 January 2023 (UTC)

• Thank you a lot Kyle Peake, really appreciate it. I was/am really busy with university stuff and so on. Anyway, everything should be addressed now and thanks for the review. :D Iaof2017 (talk) 00:03, 6 January 2023 (UTC)

• ✓ Pass now, good job and it's within the week target for GAs! --K. Peake 08:54, 6 January 2023 (UTC)

• Great. :) Iaof2017 (talk) 12:13, 6 January 2023 (UTC)