Talk:I Like You So Much Better When You're Naked (Grey's Anatomy)/GA1

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 17:50, 29 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

Issues:

  • Lede: the 114th episode overall → the show's 114th episode overall
  • Lede: It was written by Tony Phelan and Joan Rater, directed by Donna Deitch, and aired on ABC in the United States on January 21, 2010 → It was written by Tony Phelan and Joan Rater, and was directed by Donna Deitch. It originally aired on ABC in the United States on January 21, 2010
  • Lede: No need to link 18–49 demographic
  • Reception: No need to link 18–49 demographic
  • Reception: among critics → among television critics
  • Reception: TV Fanatic doesn't need to be italic
  • References: Ref. 5 - CNN? It is the "Time, Inc."
  • References: SheKnows Entertainment?
    • Yes, that is the publisher of TV Fanatic, as shown at the bottom of their website.

Good work. On hold. TBrandley 08:16, 30 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

  Done, TRLIJC19 (talk) 08:30, 30 June 2012 (UTC)Reply