Talk:I Don't Search I Find/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 09:25, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Will get started on this sometime today or tomorrow --Kyle Peake (talk) 09:25, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Cover art needs alt text
• Use bullet points instead of hlist in the infobox

 Not done --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

• Recording date is unsourced
• "is a song recorded by American singer" → "is a song by American singer"
• "for her fourteenth studio album," → "from her fourteenth studio album,"
• "written and produced by Madonna and Mirwais Ahmadzaï" → "written and produced by Madonna, alongside Mirwais"
• The Italy release sentence should be the following sentence instead
• "as the fourth official single from Madame X" → "as the fourth single from the album" with the appropriate target

 Not done --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

• Mention that the release was to contemporary hit radio with the appropriate wikilink
• Also, fix the label since the source states it was through Universal
• The EPs release sentence should come directly after this in the new order
• "several remixes were released" → "several remixes had been released"
• "It is an" → "The track is an"
• "influenced track that takes inspiration" → "influenced song that takes inspiration"

 Not done Change to "It is an..." instead since you just stated "the song" shortly before, but change "the song" to "the track" for consistency --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

• Target house to House music

 Not done I meant keep the prose the same but change the target --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

• "previous works such as" → "previous works, including"
• "received positive feedback from" → "received generally positive reviews from" since not all were positive
• "and deemed it one of the best tracks from the album" → "and deemed the track one of the best songs from Madame X"
• "also gave Madonna her record-breaking" → "gave Madonna her record-breaking"
• "on Billboard's Dance Club Songs chart" → "on the US Billboard Dance Club Songs chart"
• Target UK Single Sales to UK music charts and change to UK Singles Sales
• "it reached number 66" → "the track reached number 66"
• "The song was performed on the singer's" → "It was performed on Madonna's"

 Done

Background and composition

• First para looks good
• "was written and produced by Madonna and Mirwais" → "was written by Madonna and Mirwais, who also handled production"
• "It takes its title after a quote by" → "The track takes its title after a quote by"
• "and a "rumbling" bass line;" → "and "rumbling" bassline;" with the wikilink

 Not done a is not needed before "rumbling" in this context --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

• "it draws influence from Madonna's previous works such as" → "the track draws influence from Madonna's previous works, such as"

 Not done where is the comma? --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

• "tone, the phrase" → "tone, she repeats the phrase"
• "Also present is a" → "Also included is a"
• "sample taken from" → "sample, taken from" with the target

 Not done where is the target fix? --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

• "inside your soul" Madonna was" → "inside your soul", Madonna was"

 Done

Release and critical reception

• "On December 2019, an" → "On December 6, 2019, an"
• "featuring three remixes created by" → "featuring three remixes of the song created by"
• "was distributed to digital retailers" → "was released for digital download and streaming through Interscope Records"
• "An additional EP − featuring remixes" → "An additional EP that includes remixes"
• "DJ Kue and Offer Nissim − was" → "DJ Kue, and Offer Nissim was"
• "on May 2, 2020" → "on May 2, 2020 by the aforementioned label"
• "In Italy, "I Don't Search I Find" was released" → "In Italy, Universal Music Group released "I Don't Search I Find""
• "the fourth official single from" → "the fourth single from" with the target

 Not done --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

• "Upon release, the single received positive from" → "The song was met with generally positive reviews from"
• "and compared it to" → "and compared the song to"
• "isn’t a song so much as a mood. It’s" → "isn't a song so much as a mood. It's"
• "for a quick bump or fuck"." → "for a quick bump or fuck."" since punctuation should be inside quotes for full sentences
• "from NME, also compared it" → "from NME also compared the song"
• "Jeremy Halliger, from" → "Jeremy Halliger, writing for"
• "said it was" → "said the song was"
• "’90s disco bliss, the album’s" → "'90s disco bliss, the album's"
• "from the BBC, felt it" → "from the BBC felt it"
• "and compared it to" → "and compared the song to"
• "opined that, "once it gets going" → "opined that "once it gets going"
• "'I Don’t Search I Find' is a class of its own. It’s like" → "'I Don't Search I Find' is a class of its own" and described it as "like"
• "deemed the second best song on the album;" → "deemed the song the second best track on Madame X:"
• "it’d be this" → "it'd be this"
• "On her review of" → "In her review of"
• "from The Independent, described" → "from The Independent described"
• "between Nina Simone’s" → "between Nina Simone's"
• Are you sure there aren't any targets for Bond in the context?
  • Do you suggest I wikilink it to James Bond music?--Christian (talk) 15:46, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

Yeah, that sounds right. --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

• "of the fiercest ‘90s dance" → "of the fiercest '90s dance" with the target
• "since, well, the ‘90s?"." → "since" the 1990s decade."
• "from The Irish Times, stated that" → "from The Irish Times stated of Madonna's performance that"
• "'I Don’t Search I Find', complete" → "'I Don't Search I Find', complete"
• Target mid-tempo to Tempo
• "'I Don’t Search I Find'", comparing it" → "'I Don't Search I Find'", comparing the track"
• "the eight best song of 2019" → "the eighth best song of 2019"

 Not done --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

• "even though it’s a clear" → "even though it's a clear"
• "it’s the closest thing" → "it's the closest thing"

 Done

Commercial reception and live performance

• Mention the debut position; add a source if needed
• "reached the first position" → "reached the summit"
• "number-one songs in a single" → "number one songs on a single"

 Not done --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

• "The song also peaked at number 30 on the Dance/Electronic Songs chart on the same week it topped the Dance Club Songs chart." → "That same week, the song peaked at number 30 on the Dance/Electronic Songs chart."
• "entered the singles sales chart" → "entered the Singles Sales chart" with the target
• "the fifth position of the" → "the fifth position on the"
• [28][29] should both be solely at the end of the sentence
• "was included on Madonna's" → "was featured on Madonna's"
• "and featured the singer" → "and featured the singer performing"
• "expressed that "[Madonna] embodied" → "expressed that Madonna "embodied"
• Wikilink music video to itself

 Done

Track listing

• Retitle to Track listings
• Target on Honey Dijon should only be under the actual track listing and not in the title

 Done

Credits and personnel

• Wikilink Madonna to herself
• Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between credits and personnel
• Target vocals to Singing

 Done

Charts

• Good

Release history

• Target Digital download to Music download on the first mention
• Ditto for streaming to Streaming media
• The Italy release was to Universal; fix this

 Done

See also

• Good

References

• Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
• Copyvio score looks good at 22.5%
• Target Billboard to Billboard (magazine) on ref 2
• Cite The Ringer as publisher instead for ref 11 but keep the target
• Citations regarding the Honey Dijon remixes of "I Don't Search I Find": → Citations regarding the release of the Honey Dijon remixes of "I Don't Search I Find": on ref 15
• Remove target on Billboard for ref 25
• Wikilink Official Charts Company to itself on ref 27
• Citations regarding the remixes EP of "I Don't Search I Find": → Citations regarding the release of the remixes EP of "I Don't Search I Find": on ref 34

 Done

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold but noticed that on this occasion of me reviewing one of your articles, a lot of the issues from last time are no longer present; well picked up! --Kyle Peake (talk) 14:27, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

Let me know @Kyle Peake: if I missed anything--Christian (talk) 19:22, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

Chrishm21 I will have a look through now. --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

@Kyle Peake: I have finally fixed those issues you mentioned --Christian (talk) 13:24, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

✓ Pass, that was nice and quick! --Kyle Peake (talk) 13:47, 1 July 2020 (UTC)