Talk:I Do, Adieu/GA1

Latest comment: 11 years ago by George Ho in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 14:09, 9 July 2012 (UTC)Reply

Issues:

  • Infobox: Running time has to be without commercials. It doesn't matter if it isn't the BBC. It goes for about 22 minutes without commercials.
    •   Not all GA episodes have to explain exact time; 30 minutes is the best way I can.
  • Lede: What channel did it air on? Change to "It originally aired on May 7, 1987, on NBC.
    •   Done
  • Plot: Needs to say what happened completely in the episode. "Plot" summary is way too short.
  • Production: Add who wrote the episode, and directed the episode in the "Production" section
    •   Done

That's mainly it. Good work, and on hold. TBrandley 15:18, 9 July 2012 (UTC)Reply

I have changed last sentence of the lede. Also, I'm going to   add a non-free image soon. --George Ho (talk) 18:58, 9 July 2012 (UTC)Reply
  Added non-free image. --George Ho (talk) 20:11, 9 July 2012 (UTC)Reply