Talk:Hvila vid denna källa

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:41, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

This is the oldest unreviewed songs GAN so I'll give it a go! --K. Peake 09:41, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:43, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Lead

• Img looks good!

• Thanks!

• The word "or" is redundant in brackets since these make it clear you are using an alternate title

• Gone.

• Not only should best-known and best-loved be in a different sentence from the first one, but the ref shouldn't be in the lead because everything there needs to be cited in the body

• Fixed.

• Subtitle should come before the narrator's part

• Fixed.

• What the narrator offers should not be in quotes, unless you use a source and if so, this needs to be the same phrasing

• Cited.

• That's better but it should only be invoked once in the sentence. --K. Peake 21:29, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

• Wikilink Snipe to itself

• Done.

• Again, the usage of "or" is useless for the subtitle brackets part per earlier

• It's the translation of "eller". The word is particular to this Epistle.

• Oh I did not know that, thanks for explaining. --K. Peake 21:29, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

• "has been performed in" → "has been used in" unless your source says performed, then reword in the body

• Done.

• There should be a second para of sufficient length, which can be created if you add something about reception alongside the final parts in the new order

• Done.

Context

• The first sentence's ref should solely be at the end of it

• Moved.

• "at the royal court." → at places including the royal court."

• Done.

• "the eighteenth century." → "the 18th century." per MOS:NUM

• Done.

Song

Melody and verse form

• Add relevant info for the audio sample text to meet WP:NFCCP

• Done. The melody is of course free, however.

• Pipe 2/4 time to Duple and quadruple metre

• I think we should leave this one; the target article clearly needs work and may one day have a 2/4 section or at least a link anchor.

• Pipe key to Key (music)

• Done.

• "each of 14 lines," → "each consisting of 14 lines,"

• Done.

• "making it one of" → "standing as one of"

• That breaks the connection with the previous phrase.

• Remove comma after Epistle 25

• No, "Epistle 25" is in apposition to the song's name, which is comma-delimited.

• "something Bellman is known" → "which Bellman is known"

• Done.

• "that it must" → "disputed that it must"

• Edited.

• "the source is" → "the official source is" to make it clear this is not one of their opinions

• Edited.

• Imgs look good!

• Thanks.

Lyrics

• Wikilink snipe to itself

• Done.

• Pipe game to Galliformes

• Done.

Reception

• Merge with the below section, retitling to Reception and legacy

• Done.

• Img looks good!

• Thanks.

• The film and schoolbook parts should be at the end of the merged section

• Moved.

• "has featured in" → "has been featured in"

• Edited.

• "in this, the last" → "in the composition, the last"

• No, it's clear as it is: the next word is "Epistle".

• "as does the final stanza:" → "like the final stanza does:"

• It's already in plain English.

• If dying words refers to all of those in the Burman para, then first note it after "is Bellman's" instead

• Moved.

• "and Bellman knew that" → "while Bellman knew that"

• Edited.

• "in Bellman's longest poem," → "in Bellman's longest poem" plus merge this with the above para

• The commas delimit the poem's name, in apposition. Merged paras.

• Pipe parmesan to Parmigiano Reggiano

• Done.

• Merge the Svenska Dagbladet para with the one below it

• Done.

• "then than it is now." → "then than at the lecture's time."

• Edited.

• "dismisses the possibility that it" → "dismissed the possibility that the pimpinella"

• I think we're better without that repetition, it's twice above and twice in this sentence already.

• Wikilink as aniseed instead

• Done.

Recording and adaptations

• Make this the last para of reception and legacy, merging with the films and songbook info

• Merged.

• "where it forms the title track of" → "forming the title track of"

• Edited.

• Either add more info for the Sven-Bertil Taube cover or remove it per WP:SONGCOVER

• Done.

• "It has been" → "The composition has been"

• Edited.

Notes

• Pipe little death to La petite mort

• Done.

References

• Copyvio score looks solid at 29.6%!!!

• Noted.

• The Bellman Society → Bellman Society on ref 2, with the wikilink per MOS:LINK2SECT

• Done.

• Refs 7 and 10 are duplicates

• What source is ref 8 supposed to lead to exactly?

• Fix MOS:CAPS issues with ref 11

• Done.

• Pipe Svensk Filmdatabas to Swedish Film Database on ref 15 and add the language parameter

• Done.

• Wikilink Højskolesangbogen on ref 16 and add the language parameter

• Done.

• Add the language parameter for ref 17

• Done.

Sources

• Wikilink as Albert Bonniers Förlag instead

• Done.

• Pipe Simon and Schuster to Simon & Schuster

• Done.

External links

• Add the name of the website that the text is at

• Done.

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed after this speedy review! --K. Peake 21:29, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

• All done now. Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:05, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

• ✓ Pass time! --K. Peake 11:02, 5 December 2021 (UTC)