Talk:Hurt: The EP/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 22:52, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose):
   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references):
   b (citations to reliable sources):
   c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects):
   b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Infobox

• No issues

Lead

• ...by British singer-songwriter Leona Lewis, released on 9 December 2011. → Put what record label released the EP
•  Done Aaron • ^{You Da One}
• The EP served as something to bridge the gap for her fans whilst she finishes recording for her third studio album, Glassheart (2012). → This is not an issue at the moment, but when "Glassheart" is released, make sure you change it to the past tense

  Thanks. Aaron • ^{You Da One}

• The EP peaked at number seven in Scotland, number eight in the United Kingdom and number 15 in Ireland on those countries album charts. → Not necessary to include "on those countries album charts"

  It is, as it shows that it was a chart it charted on. A song doesn't chart in a country, it charts on that countries chart. Aaron • ^{You Da One} 23:58, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

Noted. Rp0211 ^(talk2me)

Background and development

• Hurt: The EP consists of three covers: "Hurt" by Nine Inch Nails; "Iris" by the Goo Goo Dolls and "Colorblind" by Counting Crows.[8] The EP was produced by Smith.[9] → Comma is needed after "Nine Inch Nails" and not a semicolon; Combine two sentences into one

   Done Aaron • ^{You Da One}

• The EP was only made available to purchase digitally. It was released in Canada, Ireland and the United Kingdom on 9 December 2011, to dowload via iTunes.[11][12][13] → Combine two sentences into one for better

   Done Aaron • ^{You Da One}

Composition and critical reception

• According to WP:SAMPLE, the audio recording has to be less than 10% of the original recording (in this case less than 22 seconds), and it is 25 seconds right now

  I'll get someone to upload another. Aaron • ^{You Da One} 00:01, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Noted. Rp0211 ^(talk2me)

Promotion

• No issues

Track listing

• No issues

Personnel

• No issues

Charts

• No issues

Release history

• No issues

Actually the article don't mention that the EP was released only as a digital version — Preceding unsigned comment added by 189.5.15.170 (talk) 00:40, 19 October 2012 (UTC)

References

• Reference 1 → Wiki-link "Digital Spy" and "Hachette Filipacchi Médias"

   Done Aaron • ^{You Da One}

• Reference 2 → Even though it is an actual interview, I am not sure if you can use this source as it is on a third party YouTube account

  Changed to the cite interview template. Aaron • ^{You Da One}

Noted. Rp0211 ^(talk2me)

• Reference 5 → "Digital Spy" and "Hachette Filipacchi Médias" should not be wiki-linked because they were mentioned earlier

   Done Aaron • ^{You Da One}

• Reference 26 → Fix formatting issue

   Done Aaron • ^{You Da One}

• Reference 28 → "Broadcast Music, Inc." does not need to be wiki-linked

   Done Aaron • ^{You Da One}

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold. There are some minor prose issues and reference formatting errors that are keeping this article from reaching good article status. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address points you believe do not concern the good article criteria. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 23:49, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

Since all of the issues have been addressed, I feel confident passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work you have produced. Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 02:55, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks :) Aaron • ^{You Da One} 11:09, 20 June 2012 (UTC)