Talk:Hurricane Otis (2005)/GA2

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Lord Roem in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lord Roem (talk) 02:07, 3 March 2011 (UTC)Reply


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Lead

  • Not sure on the convention on this, but note the year in the lead??
  • Wikilink tropical storm
  • Done indirectly, by linking tropical cyclone to "hurricane" ("tropical storm" would be linked to the same page).
  • Expand the lead to at least two paragraphs. See WP:LEAD.
  • Not needed. The article is relatively brief, so it can be summarized adequately in the one paragraph that is there right now. If there's any specific facts or details you'd like to see added, let me know, but otherwise I don't see the need to add text for the sake of adding text. Juliancolton (talk) 21:04, 4 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

History

  • "By late on September 28..." should be "By late September 28...."

Preparations and mpx

  • I think you can omit the two specific ships which reported high winds.

Other

  • Links to several redirect/disambugation pages:
    • Agua Blanca
    • Comondu (redirect page)
    • Miraflores

Concluding Thoughts