Talk:Hurricane Olivia (1975)

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Good articleHurricane Olivia (1975) has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
March 3, 2011Good article nomineeListed
December 22, 2011Good topic candidatePromoted
April 2, 2024Good topic removal candidateDemoted
Current status: Good article

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I think it should be kept just for hurricane history purposes,personally. --Thebirdlover (talk) 23:30, 2 October 2010 (UTC)Reply

We're not merging this article, it is a GA, and very notable. YE Pacific Hurricane 20:13, 18 July 2011 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:11, 2 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

I'll be reviewing this article shortly, just getting things set up first. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:11, 2 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

  • Second and third sentences of the lead start with "It..."
  • Last two sentences of the lead start with "The hurricane..."
    • I think I fixed the above two, but I fixed it assuming the complaint was two sentences in a row beginning with the same word(s). If this wasn't right, feel free to revert me. Ks0stm (TCG) 18:00, 2 March 2011 (UTC)Reply
  • Link circulation to Low-pressure area (I'm assuming)
  • "The circulation became much better defined the next day, and on October 23 Olivia turned northeastward, attaining hurricane status that evening." - Redundancy/time confusion. You state the next day (following October 22) then state on October 23. To me, that reads as if there is a day between the two.
  • "Further intensification occurred, and around 0500 UTC on October 25 Olivia made landfall on Mazatlán, Sinaloa with peak winds of 115 mph (185 km/h), with gusts to 140 miles per hour (230 km/h)..." - with peak winds...with gusts. Slight repetition, better to reword it.
  • "As Olivia moved ashore, it produced locally heavy rainfall peaking at 7.28 in (185 mm) in Pueblo Nuevo, Durango." comma after rainfall
  • "...although precipitation of around 1 in (25 mm) reached as far south as Michoacán." - How far is this from where the center was?
  • "Olivia is one of only three major hurricanes on record to strike Mazatlan, the others being the 1943 hurricane, as well as another in 1957; in addition Hurricane Tico in 1983 came close." - close to what?
  • In the first sentence of the last paragraph, Mazatlán is missing the á.
  • Last paragraph seems out of order; "Three days after...Immediately...The day after

Aside from these issues, the article is good. I'll pass it once they've been addressed. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:23, 2 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

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