Talk:Hurricane Jimena (2009)/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sp33dyphil ^{"Ad astra"} 01:30, 6 August 2011 (UTC)

• "$97.5 million" MXN$ or US$? You need to indicate this for every $ figure from here on in.
  • USD. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane}
• "El Imparcial" or "Elimparcial"? Is it a newspaper? If yes, it should be italicised.
  • It is the second one. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
• "off Mexico's Pacific Coast" Coast shouldn't be italised.
  • It was never italicized. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)

• Sorry, Coast shouldn't be capitalised. Sp33dyphil ^{"Ad astra"} 23:47, 13 August 2011 (UTC)

• • • Fixed. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 02:19, 14 August 2011 (UTC)

• "Two days after developing" --> "Two days after the start of development"?
  • No need for the start, but otherwise switched it to "development".YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 15:00, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
• "NHC" should come after the first mention of "National Hurricane Center", and thereafter should only be mentioned as "NHC".'
  •  Done. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
• "becoming a major hurricane" how's a major hurricane different from a "regular" one?
  • A storm winds winds of 111 mph or higher. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
• "Jimena weakened back to a returned to tropical storm status over land"
  •  Done.YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
• "brownout reduced visibility by 1/4" what's a brownout and 1/4?
  • • It is a SW US term, I wikilinked it. 1/4 is 25%.YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
• "Two powerlines also fell down" try "fell up".
  • Changed, but I don't like the new wording. 14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
• "upgraded into Category 2"
  •  Done. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
• "The The United" duplication
  • Epic fail by me.YE ^{Pacific Hurricane}
• "180 vulnerable families" what role does vulnerable play?
  • Removed it.YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
• According to Checklinks, there are four dead links.
  • Fixed them. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 14:54, 13 August 2011 (UTC)

• Still one dead link. Sp33dyphil ^{"Ad astra"} 23:47, 13 August 2011 (UTC)

• • Fixed. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 02:19, 14 August 2011 (UTC)

• FN 1 it's either "Pronounce Names" or "Pornouncenames.com"
  • The second one. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
• FN 5 check formatting.
  • Ugh, I hate this. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 14:54, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
• standardise date style.
  • On the NCDC links, the date is not known, so I include the year, but fixed the rest.YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
    • Issue not fixed – I see both DMY and YMD styles. Plus I don't think "Staff Writer" is really needed for the refs (of course someone has to write it!) Sp33dyphil ^{"Ad astra"} 10:43, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
      • I think I fixed it (agian), I put "Staff Writer" on there for consistency with other articles. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 16:37, 14 August 2011 (UTC)

End note

• I'm very happy with the article; it meets all evert GA criterion. I hope to see this page at FAC. Until then, have fun! Sp33dyphil ^{"Ad astra"} 06:17, 17 August 2011 (UTC)