Talk:Hunter Greene (baseball)
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Mike Christie in topic GA Review
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Notability edit
@Yankees10:: I think this goes beyond "routine coverage". [1] [2] [3] [4] [5] [6] [7] [8] [9] [10] [11] [12] [13] [14] [15] – Muboshgu (talk) 18:22, 7 December 2016 (UTC)
- I disagree strongly. Most of that is the definition of routine coverage from my interpretation of it. Using [16] as an example, you'd count that as "coverage". It's two sentences and about as routine as it gets. Add in the fact that he's only a high school baseball player and I think he fails both WP:NHSPHSATH and GNG at this point. Just compare Jason Groome's, who you created at a similar time last year, coverage to this and it's not even close. There was plenty for his article back then, however this I feel is too soon--Yankees10 18:50, 7 December 2016 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 11:50, 17 August 2022 (UTC)
I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 11:50, 17 August 2022 (UTC)
The image is appropriately tagged; sources are reliable.
- "Greene learned how to pitch at the instructional facility and appearing in several youth showcase events": inconsistent tense.
- Changed to
and appeared
to fix tense.
- Changed to
- There are uncited sentences. I'm not sure the "average fastball" velocity deserves a place in the article anyway, given that we're in the middle of the season.
- Everything beginning with the May 15 sentence was added by other individuals. I have since cleaned up that section to include only relevant, cited information: a large performance shift in June, an MLB record, and a recent injury.
- Per WP:EL, Instagram and Twitter links shouldn't be included in the external links section.
- Removed.
- No career statistics section?
- Baseball articles do not typically have these unless the player is no longer active. In that case, career statistics are usually rendered in prose. See Tyler Skaggs, an FA, for an example.
-- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 12:05, 17 August 2022 (UTC)
- Mike Christie Addressed everything. — GhostRiver 15:04, 31 August 2022 (UTC)
Pass. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 22:02, 31 August 2022 (UTC)