Talk:Hundred Years' War, 1345–1347

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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 16:23, 7 October 2021 (UTC)

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• ... that in 1345 and 1346 the English repeatedly defeated the French in both north and south-west France? Source: Wagner, John A. (2006). "Hundred Years' War, Phases of". Encyclopedia of the Hundred Years War. Westport, Connecticut; London: Greenwood Publishing. pp. 160–164. ISBN 978-0-313-32736-0 p. 161.

• Reviewed: Zhong Huijuan

Created by Gog the Mild (talk). Self-nominated at 22:49, 18 September 2021 (UTC).

• QPQ done, no image to evaluate, created 18 September so totally new enough. The hook is fascinating and, better yet, inline cited! The sources is RS, Greenwood being a reputable publisher. Both article and hook are NPOV. Aside from some false positives on quotes, Earwig shows no obvious signs of copyvio. Looks great! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Chetsford (talk • contribs)

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Hundred Years' War (1345–1347)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Djmaschek (talk · contribs) 04:00, 19 September 2021 (UTC)

Initial notice

I will review this article for GA class. Djmaschek (talk) 04:00, 19 September 2021 (UTC)

Hi Djmaschek and many thanks for the review. I have, I think, addressed all of your comments. Gog the Mild (talk) 12:27, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

Review 1

Overall, it's a nice job. Here is my review. If I see anything else, I will let you know. Djmaschek (talk) 03:10, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

• Introduction:
  • Paragraph 3: "to 20 miles from Paris" > "to within 20 mi (32.2 km) from Paris". I see that you use the convert (cvt) tag, but missed it here.

Done.

• • Paragraph 3: There's nothing technically wrong with the sentence beginning with "The English army then turned north...", but it might be more readable if the date was at the end.

Done.

• • Paragraph 3: "4 September" > "4 September 1346". (I was looking around for a year date.)

Done.

• • Paragraph 4: "The war eventually ended in 1453, while Calais served" > Suggestion: "The war eventually ended in 1453 with the English expelled from all of France territory except Calais, which served".

Good idea. Done.

• Background:
  • Paragraph 2: "In 1340 Edward , as" > "In 1340 Edward, as" (space)

Done.

• Plans:
  • There are two lines between Background and Plans sections. (?)

One removed.

• • Paragraph 2: "South-western France". (In Background paragraph 1 south western France is rendered without the dash. Whether dash or no dash, please be consistent throughout.)

It is consistent. I use "south western", but when using the two words as a compound adjective, the rules of English grammar require a hyphen. (As in "the English-led invasion" and "the English led the invasion" not being inconsistent.)

• Crecy campaign:
  • Paragraph 2: "north and become trapped" > "north and became trapped"

Done..

• Battle of Crecy:
  • Paragraph 2: "fleeing Italians" (There is no context for this.) Suggestion: "fleeing crossbowmen" (The reader may understand this was the result of the archery exchange.)

I have added context to the preceding paragraph instead.

• Battle of Neville's Cross:
  • Please give the year date (1346).

Done

• Fall of Calais:
  • Even though the title is 1347, it would be helpful to add the date after "During March and April".

Done.

• • There is a stray "</ref>" after citation 95.

Removed.

GA class

It looks good. I didn't follow the argument about the dash, but I'm OK with that. The maps were very helpful. Djmaschek (talk) 15:27, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

Renaming

Grapple X, I am more than happy for this to be retitled. I only created it two days ago and was struggling for a title which didn't become ridiculously long winded. Any suggestions? (English offensives 1345–1347? Hundred Years' War in France (1345–1347)?) Gog the Mild (talk) 17:04, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

I also found the title confusing, but I don't have a great suggestion that isn't awkwardly long. "1345–1347 English offensives in France"? "1345–1347 English offensives (Hundred Years' War)"? Is there no established historiographic name for this portion of the HYW? -Bryan Rutherford (talk) 17:14, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

@Bryanrutherford0: I was tempted to go for "Annus mirabilis", but there isn't really support for it in the sources. (Unlike my recent FA with the excellent name of Burnt Candlemas .) Gog the Mild (talk) 17:24, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

Perhaps "1345—1347 in the Hundred Years' War" would show that it's a narrow slice of a larger topic? 𝄠ʀᴀᴘᴘʟᴇ ꭗ 17:18, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

"1345–1347 during the Hundred Years' War"? Gog the Mild (talk) 17:24, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

Works for me. I think getting the year range out of parentheticals is the main issue, for me at least. 𝄠ʀᴀᴘᴘʟᴇ ꭗ 17:29, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

Well, do not just rename this article like that when there's also Hundred Years' War (1337–1360), Hundred Years' War (1369–1389), and Hundred Years' War (1415–1453). This should be consistent and approached more broadly then. Reywas92^Talk 20:16, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

Grapple X, that is a good point Reywas92 makes. This title is in keeping with how several others dealing with just part of the war are titled. If we are going to change, we should change all of them consistently. Which would mean gaining quite a big consensus. Gog the Mild (talk) 20:39, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

It's a naming convention I haven't seen before and it does seem a little unintuitive, but it's also not something I would express any discontent with if it were kept. That said, however, compare it with how it might look with other titles—would "Queen Anne's War (1702–1703)" and "Queen Anne's War (1712–1713)" be apparent as two phases of one war, or two similarly named conflicts being disambiguated? 𝄠ʀᴀᴘᴘʟᴇ ꭗ 21:59, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

• Random passerby comment: I would recommend just using a comma or a colon (preferably comma). So Hundred Years' War, 1345–1347, Hundred Years' War, 1337–1360, Hundred Years' War, 1369–1389, and Hundred Years' War, 1415–1453. I think that makes it sufficiently clear that this is a specific time period and not a disambiguator for which Hundred Years War it was. This style isn't uncommon - see Battle of Gettysburg, first day / Battle of Gettysburg, second day, for an example. SnowFire (talk) 03:31, 7 October 2021 (UTC)

Seeing no objections here, and with Gog mentioning he'd be fine with it on his talk page, I've gone ahead and moved the pages per the above to use a comma rather than parentheses. SnowFire (talk) 20:42, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Disciplinary regulations

There is evidence of the proclamation of disciplinary regulations in 1346, cf 1385. SN54129 17:45, 4 February 2023 (UTC)