Talk:Horncastle boar's head/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 16:54, 19 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:54, 19 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

Criteria

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

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1.a Y

1.b Y
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2.a Y

2.b Y

2.c Y

2.d Y (Highest is 8.9%, due only two two shared phrases.)
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3.a Y

3.b Y
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4.a Y
5
5.a Y
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6.a Y

6.b Y

No DAB links Y
No Dead links Y
Images appropriately licensed Y

Prose Suggestions

Lede

The Horncastle helmet fragment is a decorated Anglo-Saxon boar's head that once was likely attached to the crest of a helmet. suggest The Horncastle helmet fragment is a decorated Anglo-Saxon boar's head that likely once was attached to the crest of a helmet.
Garnets form eyes, and eyebrows, skull, mouth, tusks, and snout are gilded. suggest Garnets form the boar's eyes, and its eyebrows, skull, mouth, tusks, and snout are gilded.
filled with dirt and plant matter when found, are three rivets that would have affixed the fragment to a larger object, such as a helmet. suggest which was filled with dirt and plant matter when it was found, are three rivets that would have affixed the fragment to a larger object, such as a helmet.\

Discovery

it was reported under Treasure Act 1996, need to change to it was reported under the Treasure Act 1996,, as even though the law itself doesn't have "the" in it, it still needs it as a prefix.
@Usernameunique: That is all my comments, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 19:12, 20 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

Thanks again for reviewing one of my articles, Iazyges. I've adopted all of your recommendations. --Usernameunique (talk) 19:16, 20 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

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