Talk:Homesick (Dua Lipa song)/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by The Ultimate Boss in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
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Reviewer: The Ultimate Boss (talk · contribs) 16:33, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
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It will be exciting to review one of your articles again! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 16:33, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Infobox and lead edit
- It says it's the seventh single on the lead, but the eighth on the Dua Lipa album. Which one is it?
- "The song was released by Warner Bros. Records as a digital single on 1 December 2017," → The song was released for digital download and streaming through Warner Bros. Records on 1 December 2017,"
- "it was serviced to" → "it was sent to"
- "with lyrics discussing being away from loved ones." → "with its lyrics addressing being away from loved ones."
- "but many also feeling as though it was forced." → "but also feeling it was forced."
Done
Writing and production edit
- "everything and wanting" → "everything, and wanting"
- "and she found it" → "and found it"
- "They began recording everything, humming and making up melodies." → "They began recording the song, humming and making up melodies."
- "as she though it" → "as she thought it"
Done
Music and lyrics edit
- Looks good!
Release and promotion edit
- "The song was later released as a digital single on 1 December 2017," → "The song was later released for digital download and streaming through Warner Bros. Records on 1 December 2017,"
Not done, per above. LOVI33 15:05, 10 August 2020 (UTC)
Reception edit
- "labelled the song "delicate"" → "labelled the song as "delicate""
- "Homesick" "raw," and "ready to tug at the heartstrings." → "Homesick" as a "raw," and "ready to tug at the heartstrings." track."
Done
Track listings edit
- Looks good!
Credits and personnel edit
- Looks all good!
Charts edit
- Looks good!
Certifications edit
- Looks good!
Release history edit
- Looks good!
References edit
- [1] looks great at 11.5%
Final comments and verdict edit
I am putting this On hold until the issues are fixed. Great job on this article! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 23:47, 9 August 2020 (UTC)
- The Ultimate Boss, thanks for reviewing this article! I have addressed all your comments above, is there anything else I can do? LOVI33 15:10, 10 August 2020 (UTC)
- LOVI33, Everything looks great! I am going to ✓ Pass this! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 06:26, 12 August 2020 (UTC)
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