Talk:Homer vs. Patty and Selma/Archive 1

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Sceptre in topic GA Review
Archive 1

Goofs

"Homer has smoked cigars in the past with no problem, yet he coughs a couple of times while smoking Patty and Selma's cigarettes." was removed as a goof. Cigars are not usually fully inhaled, meaning the smoke does not often enter the lung. This explains Homer's reaction to smoking cigarettes. KomradeDave 06:15, 22 February 2007 (UTC)

Unsourced moved to talkpg

Could be added back in to article when sourced. Cirt (talk) 19:13, 5 December 2008 (UTC)

Cultural references

Cultural references

Bart talking with his hand socket-puppet is a reference to Señor Wences show.[1] Bart's ballet dancing abilities are a reference to the movie Billie Elliot.


The above is indeed sourced, but it isn't really worth it to keep it in the article and have a one-sentence Cultural references subsection. I think with a Reception and also Themes section instead, that will be fine. Also, might expand later on using info from the sources listed in Further reading. Cirt (talk) 02:44, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Homer vs. Patty and Selma/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

All good, but the plot summary is about 200 words too large. On hold while concern is met. Sceptre (talk) 03:34, 5 January 2009 (UTC)

Response

Thank you for doing the GA Review. I have shortened the plot summary subsection by 200 words. Cirt (talk) 14:14, 6 January 2009 (UTC)

Looks way better; passed. Sceptre (talk) 16:16, 6 January 2009 (UTC)
  1. ^ Cite error: The named reference Mirkin was invoked but never defined (see the help page).