Talk:Hollywood Rip Ride Rockit/GA1

Latest comment: 16 years ago by IMatthew in topic GA Review

GA Review

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GA fail

I'm sorry to say that I must fail this article as it does not meet the criteria for a good article. The are sourcing problems as well as problems in the prose. Before re-nominating this article for GA in the future, follow these tips:

  • Copy-edit the article. Articles need to have a strong prose without spelling/grammer errors, and this article has a few, as well as run-ons.
  • Un-link the dates, as it is no longer part of Wikipedia's Manual of Style.
  • Add more sources/references. Mostly the "Track Layout" section, only has one reference in the beginning, and the rest of the section remains un-sourced.

If you have any questions, ask me on my talk page. Best of luck with the article, iMatthew (talk) 14:31, 7 September 2008 (UTC)Reply