Talk:Hitendra Narayan

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Lemonade51 in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 01:13, 26 November 2017 (UTC)Reply

Taking this.

  • "Hitendra Narayan was tutored as a child by John Daniell, an English sportsman who had played top-level rugby union and cricket." is there a ref for the BIB?
  • "He went up to Pembroke College, Cambridge, where he played cricket for his college, but did not make it into the university team" any idea what he read at university? Don't worry if you can't find that info, but it'd be interesting to know.
  • "In 1910, Narayan qualified for Somerset based on residency" → how about "In 1910, Narayan qualified for Somerset on residency grounds." don't like based repeated the following sentence.
  • Ref 23 doesn't seem to work for me. Spotchecked Times articles, they check out.
    • Odd, it's the right link, just dead. Added an archive url. Harrias talk 07:55, 26 November 2017 (UTC)Reply

All in all a really nice piece. No dabs, references formatted consistently. Will pass once you get back to me, on hold until then. Lemonade51 (talk) 01:13, 26 November 2017 (UTC) @Lemonade51: Thanks, responded to each of those. Harrias talk 07:55, 26 November 2017 (UTC)Reply

Looks good now, shall pass. Lemonade51 (talk) 16:46, 26 November 2017 (UTC)Reply