Talk:History of Sunderland A.F.C./GA1

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Mitchazenia in topic GA Review

GA Review

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  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    B. MoS compliance:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  

I like the article. Have some small qualms:

  1. It would look a little nicer if you could add an image to the lead.
  2. 1959-1970 - "have equaled Sunderland's achievement of lifting the FA Cup while playing outside the top tier of English football." – Source needed. Done - Source added.
  3. "In January 1949 Sunderland were involved in what is often regarded as the first case of a player" - comma after January 1949. Done - Comma added.
  4. Maybe an infobox would be sufficient for the top.

I am going to pass this anyway. I do suggest that they are completed.Mitch32(Go Syracuse) 00:03, 18 January 2009 (UTC)Reply