Talk:Hiroki Kikuta/GA1

GA Review

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I decided to review this article since I'm right in the middle of playing Secret of Mana. It was a good read in general, although there are a few concerns:

• his most recent work is the soundtrack to Concerto Gate in 2007. – This will probably change over the next few years, so instead of having to continually update it, I’d remove it.

• as the company’s products were not moving fast enough – What does this mean exactly?

• He was also given artistic freedom in the traditional sense, in that Uematsu ran the music group as a separate division in the company, keeping the composers free from artistic interference from the games' directors. – This sentence doesn’t make much sense to me. Needs to be reworded and preferably split up.

• Chinese operating company – What do you mean by operating company?

• Is the See also link really necessary? The Prince (talk) 22:47, 18 January 2010 (UTC)

• All of your concerns have been addressed. --PresN 23:21, 18 January 2010 (UTC)

I'll pass the article then. :) The Prince (talk) 23:35, 18 January 2010 (UTC)