Talk:Hina Rabbani Khar/GA1

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Vibhijain in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Vibhijain (talk · contribs) 16:50, 14 January 2013 (UTC)Reply

Hi Zia! I will review this article tomorrow. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 16:50, 14 January 2013 (UTC)Reply

  • "The PPP secured a plurality of the ... Yousaf Raza Gillani as Prime Minister." - Reference needed.
  • "She was appointed foreign minister ... ran high over the Raymond Davis incident."- Again ref needed.
  • S. M. Krishna is the common name
  • who said --> which said
  • When Khar herself said that Pakistan has "regretted its actions in 1971," then why is the word "alleged" used?
  • The word genocide should link to 1971 Bangladesh atrocities and Liberation War of 1971 should be Bangladesh Liberation War.
  • Mention that Sheikh Hasina is the Bangladeshi PM.
  • Use Pakistani Rupees instead of Rupees.
  • Expand NRO.
  • It was not the Indian newspapers which alleged the romantic affair.
  • This has a lot of information which needs to be added. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 11:37, 15 January 2013 (UTC)Reply
I'm busy right now and'll do this by the weekend. Thanks, Zia Khan 17:12, 17 January 2013 (UTC)Reply